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L.a

Language Arts
A horrible sport
This class
Its wrath

Is a horrible place

Love and Romance

Are spoke here everyday

Emotions are set free everyday

Its not gay

Its just really the way

That the emotions are set free

All those emotions follow me

As I leave the class

At around 11:24

I'm still really bored

This class bores me

Along with the rest

If I fail this class

I am not the best

This class may be fun

But for me it is hell

If I fail this class

I'll never be well

I must pass this class

With courage and pride

I have decided

To not sit on the side

And wait to fail

All the grades slipping by

I'll get an A this quarter

If not

Bye Bye

Author notes

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  • Critical Jive
    March 24, 2008
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    Your so going to fail L.A. >_<
    1. mispelled have with ave
    2. in your Author notes you actually mispelled the word *Language* D=
    3. I cant really grade the grammar since its a free write poem... *shutters* Lucky ^_^
    PS: meh im probably not any better...
    PSS: GET OFF THE COMPUTER AND GO DO YOUR WORK FOR LA YOU BEATNIK~