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Sunday Afternoons




between my fingers
you fell through...
and I suffocated
in the emptiness
you left behind.



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Prompt: "Between my fingers, and suffocating on Sundays"

I wrote it...then gave the title, for a certain Sunday came to mind when I read it.

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  • marlene47 silver member
    July 8, 2008

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    I like that suffocating in the emptiness created by a love lost. Congratulations on the HM.
    Marlene


  • adsaige
    April 16, 2008
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    yes, this is exactly it! oh, wee
    finalist list like...totally!