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Desires Of The Flesh

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Passion's flame will not be doused
as your thoughts invade my soul,
for these fettered wings of darkness
beg for you to make me whole.

My body is electrified
with a simple touch from you,
burning me to fever pitch
with hell's gates of craving viewed.

The fires from my darkest side
no longer I control,
unleashed now, you are all I need
the one who can console.

Our thoughts now one in ebony lust
this candle stays alight,
awaiting you, I can't hold out
you are my wanton knight.

And as we reach fulfillment
the wrong seems not to matter,
as we explode in sins delight
our ashes simply scatter.





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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    March 27, 2008
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    Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck, Josie


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    Wow! This has gold written all over it! Awesome poem. This is very impressive. Best of luck in the contest.


  • LittleMoon silver member
    March 24, 2008

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    I wouldn't want to be the one having to pick a winner here. This is a terrific blend of words to the illustration too. Very well done


  • Naridill gold member
    March 24, 2008
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    My lasting thought - 'WHAT A TITLE'!!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    Oh WOW.. that is just gorgeous!!

    You have penned such a piece of beautiful dark around this pic... I just love it!!

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