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The Butterfly

No need to grasp the past anymore.
Resistence surrenders,
overtaken by this
beautiful new existence.

A contest entry

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  • Candy6
    June 27, 2008
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    It's lovely!


  • whits end silver member
    May 15, 2008
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    This is beautiful poetry!


  • whits end silver member
    May 15, 2008
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    Lovely!!


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 24, 2008

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    So serenely expressive.. x Thanks ever so much for sharing and many blessings to you too. Lavender Butterfly.


  • Topaze gold member
    March 24, 2008
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    Nice

    Very nicely done and best of luck in the contest.


    • Yellow-Rose
      March 24, 2008
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      Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poem. I look forward to reading some of your writing

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