I let the music wash over me,
as the emotion pours out.
Happy or sad.
It lets me feel free.
I dance slowly round the room
till I'm dizzy and out of breath.
All my worries now tangled up together,
but at least there's more room for thought.
I calm down as the music
works it magic.
Layer after layer,
it breaks down barriers.
The harmonies touching my heart.
Leaving an everlasting mark.
Tears roll down my face,
A smile can be traced.
When the tunes are playing.
Author notes
I hope this is ok.
A contest entry
- Prompt Inspired by RainbowGirl257.
500 points, ended May 10, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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i like how you have written about the different emotions music can make you feel. you could expand on that a bit more. i especially liked the penultimate stanza. thanks for entering and good luck.
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Thanks. What's the penultimate stanza? It's probably something obvious but I can't think of it.
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wonderful poem good luck in the contest
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