The intensity of this love….the downfall of it…. (Bit of a personal rant lol).
A tear echoed off the tiles
hitting hard more followed.
Why my love
Must life,
Circumstances,
separate us and take what precious
time we have.
Complaining again, I know
But it’s just it gets me down.
Occasionally life itself tires me, pulling me
into an overanalyzing teary
state of sadness.
I do my best, referring back to the trust
in our conformation, our bonded love.
Concentrate on being thankful
that each night
your warmth remains, beside me and
faithful arms securely, hold me.
Author notes
This came from recent feelings ....the old feeling like you never see your man, even though you live together...cause hes working non-stop lol
Just had to write it, get it out....to feel better etc etc lol
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Comments
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Does good to let things out from time to time. And like they say absence makes the heart grow fonder. I hope you find some couple time soon. Nicely penned piece
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Thank you, we are going to soon, he has time off and we have a free night and resort not far away to use up
Cindy
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aww but those absences make you appreciate the together time so much more.....
Rob...
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they do...your right
Just gets hard every now & then lol
Cin
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Absence is a very hard thing to deal with! And what makes this worse, is you then feel guilty for feeling bad about this.. thinking you should be grateful that you have this love when others don't... but that is no comfort!!! And you should be sad for the time you spend apart... for that is evidence of true love!!!
I hope you guys get more time together!!
Great rant by the way!
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You said it
Thanx SiS
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i like it
i love you
hope you ok -
Don't worry sweetheart, things will get better soon. We'll talk tomorrow...ok?
Love you
Mum 
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thanks Mum I know...
Like author notes, kinda just had to not bottle it up and get it out lol
Yeah talk tomorrow...
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