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Dissolving solitude








    Ice cubes melting
  liquidity
dissolving
  into tiny heartbeats
caressing my solitude
  into a mother.





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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    March 24, 2008

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    So beautifully creative... x Thanks ever so much for sharing and many blessings to you too. Lavender Butterfly.


  • Topaze
    March 24, 2008
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    Nice

    Well done and intricately descriptive, best of good fortune in the contest.