Below the surface of sleep
be kissed
be still again
before the waters are broken
A contest entry
- picture prompt... by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended March 24, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is truly unique and immensely captivating... x Thanks ever so much for sharing and many blessings to you too. Lavender Butterfly.
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Sweet
Nice take on the prompt that tugs on the heart strings, and I'm a man. best of fortune in the contest.
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As a sucker for love poems, this makes me simply sigh. Beautiful Sis.
Love,
Amera♥
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Such a soothing read. Beautifully penned. All the best in the contest with it
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Damn it woman!
Your range so broad, your talent deep
All words erupted from your sleep
You light the way where we may walk
And while you sing, we mortals talk.
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I think you're like Danny Kaye in "The Court Jester", only you turn rhyme on and off by snapping your fingers.
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moving
delightful be be... be be be... for baby
this reminds me of people referring to the soothing contractions that can incorporate last cyclical affection felt when shock isn't but natural flow of welcome. rereading it again has the blended hearts of dreams move to image of awakening from transition... for alertness later possibly with umbilical cord filled last with placenta, which until that is birthed for completion even it's like both are in womb momentarily with exhaustion! Oh my my emotional read needed.
then more reads, this moves into every day watches for woosh of attached parenting; cosleeping towards rising with elimination communication and catch rather than squirm in diapers but instead 'still again' prior to short muscle control's taken care of. nice openness.
sweet inheretness,
babies are my subject
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