supported thigh
ruffles dress
with infant elastically also,
no mighty breath as wave of vouch
Author notes
I deleted personal first try again:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4052265
(then changed ending of 'help' here)
good luck isn't all goods; Isaiah 65:11
please comment serenely...
without unnatural emoticons NOR the applause at all, thank you
A contest entry
- picture prompt... by Lavender Butterfly.
400 points, ended March 24, 2008, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
not knee jerked but contemplative all around
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So deeply touching and beautiful... x Thanks ever so much for sharing and many blessings to you too. Lavender Butterfly.
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more than sort of buttressed
lb thanks for giving your weight of consideration to this!
the challenge here was something to work well with, glad it could be done in range --
I can't tell you how I wanted to collect my thoughts or cull lol, and now it's hard and easy to say thank you for your time and hard earned points. I enjoyed your supporting the written opportunity...
braced,
babies are my subject
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A depply touching piece, beautifully penned. All the best in the contest with it
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LadyDementia thanks for some moments
I appreciate your perceiving the special involvement to be found in my write, I even awoke with it in mind to get that right for one more edit lol.
sweet of you to want my high experience here, but was amused the sunny face expression could be taken too literally pictorially.
I'll try to bring my smile reviewing yours soon,
babies are my subject
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Excellent
Very lovely, deep with heartfelt emotions.
Very precious, elangant and a warm "calm" tone.
You have captured the image well!
Well penned!
Wish you the best in the contest!
Many blessings
David
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beautiful fun
David I'm no longer dizzy from writing...
thanks for your confidence of my attempt at '15 amazing words' as my eyes awaited what I could do instead of a novel over the ''lovely'' art to have thoughts over.
I appreciate you stopping by what weren't just skid marks lol,
babies are my subject
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