It's times like these when I miss you the most
Lieing here in our bed not wanting to be alone
I long for the days that our bed was never left, not meaning to boast
Under these covers every emotion has been shown
I've lied in you arms and between your legs
I've cried tears of sorrow, passion, even anger
I want to be with you so bad, but a real man never begs
Under these covers there is no danger
So many "I love yous" have here been spoken
I miss your voice, your smile, even your smell
The warmth of your body is enough, even in silence unbroken
Under these covers, being without you is hell
Author notes
The words just kinda flowed out of my pen, but I wanted to try a different style...I hope it doesn't sounds forced. Written March 6, 2008.
Comments
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well done, you have clearly portrayed raw emotion, 1 thing though lieing should be lying otherwise great job.
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I really liked this. I think that you did a good job portraying your emotions and it's always good to branch out into different ideas and styles. Well written and certainly well done!!
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