Our assets lay bare
You had a flush
And wanted a king
I had nothing to offer
just the joker.
A contest entry
- I need a laugh by Sarah957.
300 points, ended March 24, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wonderfully put.
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how wonderful indeed!
:-)
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Joker is a better option isnt it? lol. I loved the poem. It gave me the laugh!
Keep writing wattle
Peace
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It seems I've been in this type of card game once or twice. Nothing worse than to realize that what someone expected was far from what we have to offer. Even worse to have to admit that failure to ourselves, well to myself anyway.
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Hey I can't think of a better way to have love in your life. Love and laughter, I think is a fantastic combination!!
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You may not have won the contest, but you're definitely a king to me. Your poem was awesome and certainly gave me the laugh that I needed. Avril
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lol I'm with the joker he has a funny looking face. The king is too serious lol
Good stuff Sir Wattle
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Happy just to see the undeniable wattle flavour!
Thank you for sharing~~~
Heres a nice hug just for you!
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LMAO!!!!
I think a joker is so much more fun than a king..don't you think????
At least you have good laughs and positive talks all the time....a king always needs to be sooooooo damn serious....everybody is following his footsteps...
And I flush all the time...if this means between the teeth
I think you have a lot to offer here...
XXJeannette
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Thank you Jeanette, you are always kind. I haven't forgotten our perfect curve. I'm still trying to catch-up. --- Hope all is well in your beautiful world.
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I will take the joker he is much cooler any way Good luck in the contest
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Thank you Caption Queen.
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This is a very sweet portrait of a moment in time. Beautiful. Barbie. Xx
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Oh Ms Barble and I was sure you were strolling with the rich folk at some resort. (Thank you - hope all is on track)
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This is where I scratch my head and say "I dont get it" like a dumb blonde. I think I see a double meaning but I'm not quite sure...
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Thank you Ms Country Charm. -- I'm never complex. What you see is what (all) you get with me.
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Ah, you finally came with a new post!
You are so good writing poems like this one.
There is always more to read on the words than we might think when reading the just once.
well done Eric!
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Thank you Ms Gaze - I know you have a busy schedule keeping the admirers in check.
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Glad to see you writing again
my dear friend
Good luck, this was enjoyable.
SouthernBelle
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Oh wow. Hi Ms Belle.
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Hehe great piece. All the best in the contest with it
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Thank you for reading my scribble.
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Hey! you wrote something!!! woohooo
this is great best of luck dear guru
Tasha
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Thankyou Lady Tasha. (Hi Kaiser)
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