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Kings and Queens

Our assets lay bare
You had a flush
And wanted a king
I had nothing to offer
just the joker.

A contest entry

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  • Lonely
    November 5, 2008

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    Joker is a better option isnt it? lol. I loved the poem. It gave me the laugh!
    Keep writing wattle

    Peace

  • Yemassee silver member
    October 15, 2008

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    It seems I've been in this type of card game once or twice. Nothing worse than to realize that what someone expected was far from what we have to offer. Even worse to have to admit that failure to ourselves, well to myself anyway.


  • heartnsoul
    July 1, 2008

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    Hey I can't think of a better way to have love in your life. Love and laughter, I think is a fantastic combination!!


  • Diamond
    June 28, 2008

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    You may not have won the contest, but you're definitely a king to me. Your poem was awesome and certainly gave me the laugh that I needed. Avril

  • Warrior7
    June 22, 2008

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    lol I'm with the joker he has a funny looking face. The king is too serious lol
    Good stuff Sir Wattle


  • fathom me
    May 28, 2008

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    Happy just to see the undeniable wattle flavour!
    Thank you for sharing~~~
    Heres a nice hug just for you!


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    April 25, 2008

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    LMAO!!!!

    I think a joker is so much more fun than a king..don't you think????
    At least you have good laughs and positive talks all the time....a king always needs to be sooooooo damn serious....everybody is following his footsteps...

    And I flush all the time...if this means between the teeth

    I think you have a lot to offer here...
    XXJeannette


    • wattle silver member
      April 25, 2008
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      Thank you Jeanette, you are always kind. I haven't forgotten our perfect curve. I'm still trying to catch-up. --- Hope all is well in your beautiful world.

  • queen Moderators member
    March 25, 2008

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    I will take the joker he is much cooler any way Good luck in the contest


  • Barbie
    March 25, 2008

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    This is a very sweet portrait of a moment in time. Beautiful. Barbie. Xx


    • wattle silver member
      March 27, 2008
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      Oh Ms Barble and I was sure you were strolling with the rich folk at some resort. (Thank you - hope all is on track)

  • Sarah957
    March 24, 2008

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    This is where I scratch my head and say "I dont get it" like a dumb blonde. I think I see a double meaning but I'm not quite sure...

    • wattle silver member
      March 27, 2008
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      Thank you Ms Country Charm. -- I'm never complex. What you see is what (all) you get with me.

  • gaze
    March 24, 2008

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    Ah, you finally came with a new post!
    You are so good writing poems like this one.
    There is always more to read on the words than we might think when reading the just once.
    well done Eric!


    • wattle silver member
      March 27, 2008
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      Thank you Ms Gaze - I know you have a busy schedule keeping the admirers in check.

  • Ephiphany silver member
    March 24, 2008

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    Glad to see you writing again

    my dear friend
    Good luck, this was enjoyable.

    SouthernBelle


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 24, 2008
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    Hehe great piece. All the best in the contest with it

  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    March 24, 2008

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    Hey! you wrote something!!! woohooo
    this is great best of luck dear guru

    Tasha

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