I didn’t mean to do this to you.
I never meant this harm.
It hurts me to think that you
Are stuck up in my charm
trapped
I’m not angry you see
Just bewildered and
Unsure what to do mostly
I close my eyes and
Think
This was not my intention
And I’m sorry this
Had to happen
If there was a way to make this
Any better
I would do it in a heartbeat
You were supposed to be a friend
Not someone I was destined to meet
And love I need to find a way to be your friend
Author notes
I HATE rhyming poetry.
but I love to annoy me so here goes my pitiful attempt at it.
wrarw!™
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ok a honest comment this was good i liked it not my normal stuff i read and the looks of it not some thing u would normally write, the only problem i had with it was the ending didnt seem to fit the poem i understand what you were trying to get across but there must be a better way to end it so it fits the poem and flows with it other then that,
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yeah I had that same problem. the end sucks wood. I'm probably going to change it soon so it fits better but I just don't have the right words with me yet.
now I don't feel like caning you anymore...
pity...
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meat/ don't you mean "meet"?
Good attempt at rhyming,though,is it about a friend who turned out to be something more? -
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you could say...
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