The song of your eyes
Softer than wings of butterflies,
Softer still than the voice
Of stars in midnight skies
Or the sound of Spring
Arising over the horizon
With the gentle whisper
Of a rose about to bloom.
The whisper of your eyes
As gentle as the moons’
Quicksilver path over dark lakes
Silent as pine sentinels
Having stood and watched
And waited,
Unmoved and unmoving
Since the dawn of time.
The silence of your eyes
In one fleeting gaze
Like a deep breath held,
The world waiting in
Dark morning before dawn
And the feeling conveyed . . .
Bigger than the sky.
A contest entry
- Best Love Poetry Ever Written!!!! Give Me All of Your Passion!!! by Eulb kcalB.
350 points, ended March 28, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - When I Look In Your Eyes. by Poetryintheblood.
450 points, ended April 25, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thank you for your most beautiful entry, good luck, Josie
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*sigh* Wow! Oh, this is just so very beautiful indeed. I think of all the poems I have read of yours in the thoughts of love, this one just seems to bare the soul - and speak so tender; with the grace of amorous reflections hinging upon that everlasting spark. Some amazing imagery here - just truly romantic, and filled with a beautiful reflection of love itself. Adore that last line!!!!!
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Beautiful.
The songs of eyes whispering silence ... How gentle in its flown, the poem intensitied from sound to whispers to silence ... In much the same way a kiss intensifies when eyes lock.
How lovely a poem and how tender.
Myra
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wow - I'm impressed..you are improving every time I read you...this is a beautiful love poem... It is so soft & what lovely metaphors you have used...I love this one,,my favorite by you, bookmarking..
(in the title loves' should be love's
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