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Fearful Heart

[Voices in background echoing]
-We’ll be together forever
-I’ll never forget you
-This heart will forever belong to you
-I’m yours and no one else’s
-I want to be together for the rest of our lives

Pretty words written
In a pretty paper
Pretty words written
In a black and bloody ink

Pretty words you wrote to me
To substitute the love to be
But pretty words don’t mean a thing to me

Just tell me that you love me
Tell me you’re forever here
Tell me that you love me
And this heart will never fear

Held up by a spider string
You became my everything
And relevant is nothing with out you

Tell me that you love me
Tell me that you’re mine
Tell me that you love me
And this heart will be just fine

You’re love’s the only thing I got
And I don’t want to let it rot
I swear I’ll give it my best shot
If you tell me

Tell me that you love me
Tell me you’re forever here
Tell me that you love me
And this heart will never fear

Tell me that you love me
Tell me that you’re mine
Tell me that you love me
And this heart will be just fine

Tell me that you love me
And this heart will never fear

Tell me that you love me
And this heart will be just fine

Tell me that you love me
Tell me that you love me
Tell me that you love me

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  • Pandorea
    May 31, 2008
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    this would, i think, make a great song. i'm hearing it in my head as a symphonic metal-ish thing like NIghtwish, or maybe more alternative rock. i dunno.

    but i like it. if you ever do make that band you want to, tell me cos if this is the lyrical style i love it already.