Left
Left
Left
Right
Left
Step. . . . . . . Step. . . . . . .Step
Don't stop, Don't trip, Don't tire
Keep focus, Keep tall, Keep up
Step. . . . . . . Step. . . . . . .Step
Hard to understand my thoughts
Hard to catch my breath
Hard to be able to talk
My hands shake, My legs tremble
My heart quivers and cries with the thought
The thought
Step. . . . . . . Step. . . . . . .Step
Don't stop, Don't trip, Don't tire
Keep focus, Keep tall, Keep up
Step. . . . . . . Step. . . . . . .Step
The thought
That she feels the same way I do
That she loves me back
The thought that runs thru my head as I walk with her
Holding her hand, Holding the thought, Holding my breath
So the moment lasts forever
A contest entry
- Best Love Poetry Ever Written!!!! Give Me All of Your Passion!!! by Eulb kcalB.
350 points, ended March 28, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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That she feels the same way I do
That she loves me back
The above lines from your poem caught me off guard, but I enjoyed it.
At first this poem gave me a military type point of view. I thought that this was nicely put.
The thought that runs thru my head as I walk with her
Holding her hand, Holding the thought, Holding my breath
So the moment lasts forever
Do all guys feel that way?? I wish that were so.
This is a very sweet poem. I think that many people feel that way though when they walk with someone that they like.
Very relatble.
Expertly penned
Dani
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