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E.L.L.L [The Girl I Would Call Gorgeous]

I finally got to see her pictures.
I can tell she is brilliant
[her eyes gave her away instantly].

And I know she’s not mine;
she’s not mine.

But I can see her entire future in perfect succession.
I can see how amazingly beautiful
this one little body already will become.
And her daddy will hate it.

But if I know one thing,
it’s that she’ll never understand how loved she is.
Because there’s irrationality
in how much perfection I see in those
tiny hands.

And she saved me in every sense of that word
by being here.

Elizabeth Lyric Lennon Lewis...
I owe my life to you.
And I’ll return it one grain at a time.

Author notes

This is a sort of halfway poem to give to my darling little everything, Elizabeth Lyric Lennon Lewis.
I look forward to seeing her grow up to be the beautiful woman I know she will be.

I already love you more than words could tell you.

Ever since I can remember I been workin' these ho's.

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  • SurelyWritten
    March 26, 2008

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    I think I missed a whole lot while I was gone away from the pages of AllPoetry....

    I love tribute poems, no matter how well they are penned the thing that stands out the most, is the unconditional love. The selflessness.


    Hugs,
    Shirley