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[to love with a love that is more than love]

gorgeous.










and a lack of breath to describe it all--
i rush through the air to find your hiding place--
where you take me and pull me and hide me with you--
    and your hands,
          [your perfect hands, i try to remember each detail]--
against me. against you. your soft skin.
soft and pale, the perfect shade of it though.
slight freckles, light freckles...
and all the happy dust of perfection.

you know i love you and i will hold you here until you realize it.
and you will never realize completely, so i will hold you forever.

something--something simply--










beautiful.










OH YOU'RE PERFECT AND I WILL SCREAM IT THROUGH THE NIGHT AIR.

how you took my breath away.
    (you take my breath away!)

              {on a side note}
                    (and to others who thought my heart was theirs--[!]--
                        i will drop yours as a tree discards its leaves.)
              {end side note}

i will be your strong tower--
keeping you standing--standing safely, secure--
    (but should i fall)--
          [and oh, i do fall!]--
you will be there to support me through it all.

i love you with all that is love.
a love that is blessed from above.
i depart from abyss, with your love a sail.
my sweet abigail.

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