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Sanity?

These lies, I can't take it
Breaking the silence with screams
Falling away from the love I once had
Hitting the floor with the weight of the world
Vision blurry from bad judgement
Tears streaming down like the hatred that bleeds
Torn apart from everything
Hope of release escapes once again

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  • saretyuiop
    April 16, 2008

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    As a friend you know I love you right? Well my first impression is that the hope you're feeling is another bad judgement. It sounds as if you're rushing into things and... you're going to end up back where you are.

    These lies, I can't take it
    Breaking the silence with screams
    Falling away from the love I once had
    Hitting the floor with the weight of the world
    Vision blurry from bad judgement
    Tears streaming down like the hatred that bleeds
    Torn apart from everything

    I don't want to see you in this much pain.


  • The FaeQueen
    March 24, 2008
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    Wonderful poem! i love it!