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Wings of Freedom.

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Some women live in pure luxury and never need to open a door,
while others live as pure sex slaves and eat off the kitchen floor.

But no matter what you think of it, the facts are quite plain to see,
you only need to play the part of whichever person you wish to be.

Nothing happens unless you are the cause is a well known fact,
although you may make tough of it, it’s because you failed to act.

Yet many women persevere and keep on coming back for more,
but a leopard never changes its’ spots, so it’s time to slam the door.

But many spend a life in decreasing circles spiralling down into hell,
trapped in utter disappointment and confusion while living in a cell.

And so the descending spiral narrows, choking their interest in life,
while vainly hoping and praying hard, to be treated as a loving wife.

But the journey keeps descending, where black is the normal theme,
while the partner grows stronger, feeding in greed on her self esteem.

Eventually he may be judged severely and cast into the fires of hell,
for taking away your dreams including freedom and respect as well.

So it’s time to bite the bullet and unfold wide your Freedom’s wings
and disappear into happiness leaving behind all those painful things.

It may take meagre saving and the help from your family and friends,
but hope is your only weapon, as thoughts of escape finally transcends.

So walk out into God’s bright sunshine and bare your battered breast
and fight with cunning and delight and pray for help in this coming test.

For it takes much determination, so grit your teeth for the coming fight,
until you’ve won the battle of minds and victory looms clear into site.

And when you feel the sunshine again and warmth thaws out your mind,
delight in the lingering taste of freedom and the garbage you left behind.



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  • arafura gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    A lot of wisdom and truth in this one mate! Very well written and hits the nail on the head! Good luck in the contest!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    March 24, 2008
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    Nicely penned, some truth in your words. All the best in the contest with it

  • Mairi bheag gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    Written with your accustomed, straight-ahead confidence, and in your unmistakeable voice, Bazza. I hope it does well in the contest.


  • Sgt B
    March 24, 2008

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    Awww Mr. Bazza

    I am sure you will hear plenty from the women here.
    I love your poem. It's ring of truth is astounding. The flow was gentle and made it so easy to read. The Rhyme was great as usual. Great job here m y friend!


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    March 23, 2008

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    This is such a great write. It really struck a chord with me as I am sure it will with many. Well done for such a lovely write and all the best for the contest.
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