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The Dream I Wait For


If I could buy a dream
I would not ask for what you think
What I lost tore away my seams
Driving me to smoke and drink

I would want just one day
With someone I lost
With everything we meant to say
Without a single cost

That would be my dream of happiness
But I don’t think my dreams will come true
Instead I will visit the place you rest
The only place I’ll ever find you

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  • rufina caraid silver member
    March 26

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    your dream speaks of a lost loved one I feel. What better dream is there than to spend time with a much-loved person
    before you meet again for the final time. thanks you for your entry, Von Oldpoetry


  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    March 24

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    Thanks for your entry.
    This is obviously a trageted poem and you have stuck firmly to your objective. Your rhyme scheme is basic but consistent and your mesage is clear.


  • Zytv
    March 24
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    I like it

    I know exactly how you feel. Which is why I think this is pretty good. Nice Work