Looking for closure,
An out,
A finisher,
Something to settle my mind,
Stop me from caring,
And mending my heart,
I need to forget the past,
Look into the future,
And start a brand new day,
I need to L E T G O of your hand……
Loving you is like walking through a feild of broken glass.
A contest entry
- The love of your life... by jbbrandi.
750 points, ended March 24, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow hun! Lots of sadness here! I really like your last line. "Loving you is like walking through a feild of broken glass. " Very creative! Best of luck in your contest.
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Very interesting...I liked it, and it said a lot in just a few short words. Nice job, good luck in the contest, and thanks for entering!
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