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The Blesséd Realms of Yore

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Within the dragon's lair I drew my quill instead of sword ~

he leapt across the chasms wide, a rose as my reward.

He was not a ferocious beast as some would have me think ~

a tear fell slowly from his eye as he cleared his throat to drink.

"I am doomed by this cold flame that pierces breast and heart.

I am cursed to love a girl whose land lies far apart.

I am damned by this scaly skin I can only shed at night ~

her pale flesh would shudder e'er she fled if she ever glimpsed this sight."

I told him, "Ah, true love is blind ~ only faith could make her wait

until the moon is wild and full of fire, then she would not hesitate.

Please, dear Sir, you must be sure that her love is strong enough to keep ~

for a splendid star, such as you are, was never meant to weep."

He thanked me for my kindness then, and then, he turned to speak ~

"Alas, my lass is beneath the grass; it is her garden I must seek."

I placed my hand upon his brow and whispered soothing words ~

the last I knew, it seemed he flew o'er the forest, with singing birds.

When I awoke, I knew I'd been among the blesséd realms of yore ~

within my heart, he'll always breathe ~ no, I could not ask for more...
















Author notes



New contest quotation prompt:

 

"There are times, my friend,
When no matter how brave the Noble Knight
No matter how swift his Gallant Steed
No matter how pure the Maiden he would rescue
No matter how Just the cause for which he fights
There are times, my friend,
When the Dragon will still win."
-- Unknown -- 

 

 

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Pictures courtesy of Theater Of Dreams


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  • Riftkin gold member
    November 8

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    I truly did enjoyed myself reading this..
    Best of luck to you with it.

    Riftkin

  • hend shaheen
    October 4

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    WOW!! very god story filled with emotion and wisdom!! and I so much like your rhyme thanxx for taking time to enter and good luck

  • I HATE RHYMED POETRY, USUALLY ... but when you do it, not only is the rhyme scheme random in places, but it is not really random it only switches to slant rhymes only not side rhymes ... that is really nice and you avoid the stupid gallop of almost all of the poetry that rhymes around here ... ... they rhyme like cow bells and braying donkeys here and call it spot on ... how stupid that is ... but when you do it the flow is smooth as oiled kisses and writhing as happy playing tongues upon beloved notes ... when your poem needs an ars poetic lilt you give the line a push or a kick and off it goes to where it belongs ...

    the last stanza is a fine example of beautifully, expertly done modern rhyming ... heck, the whole thing rocks


    I LOVE RHYMES WHEN DONE WELL ... like this


    good rokin' my baby

  • Wow that is beautiful. I've never heard of dragons being captured in this light, I really loved it. The rhyming was perfect and your flow was great.

    Thankyou for entering my contest and best of luck.

    peace


  • scarlet screams
    June 26, 2008

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    This poem is very clever-unique. Very fairy tale-esque but also quite believable. The imagery is excellent and very touching. I really enjoyed it!


  • Blooming Poet
    May 31, 2008

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    ah so lovely, it makes me want to read it over and over again just such a moving piece you have written here.


  • Allyce May gold member
    March 25, 2008

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    "Within the dragon's lair I drew
    my quill instead of sword ~"

    I think often the quill is far more powerful than the sword, especially yours

    You make me like rhyme


  • klassy lassy
    March 25, 2008

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    Our scales-- roses with thorns which make us weep for love.... You so appeal to the mystical realm within me with this one Wanda. How easy it is to see only the surface of things and miss the treasure and the wings, too, that lift us out of the tears.

    It is true, love chastises purely and only sees the beauty. ~ Karen (Oh, did I say that I adore this rhyme of enchantment? Well, I do!)


  • Gypsie Ink
    March 24, 2008

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    Beautiful

    Captivating and enchanting. A tale I must needed to read for it sinks deep. Thank you for sharing and the sadness is almost overwhelming. Truly breathtaking. Can you tell I really loved this?


  • poet2angels gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    Whether free verse of rhyme, your natural sigh factor and way to express imagery is always there in excellent color...This is another amazing write with beautiful rhyme and flow!

    Lynda


  • Nicolette gold member
    March 24, 2008

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    It matters not if you write free verse or rhyme -
    your words are beautiful, this is poetry sublime

    And that is my little attempt at rhyming, lol. Beautiful, gentle flowing words with such a wonderful lyrical quality about it. You took me back in time with this one, Vlindertjie - a classic piece of writing that somehow made me think of beauty and the beast.

    "that her love is strong enough to keep ~
    for a splendid star, such as you are,
    was never meant to weep."

    And a star like you were always meant to write, my friend!! You should write more rhyming poems as this one is simply lovely, lovely!!

    ~ Nicolette

  • Bad Bill
    March 24, 2008

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    Different from your usual style, Wanda, but effective. I suspect, however, that rhyming poetry is not your natural element--the flow is not as smooth as your free verse poems.

    Best wishes,
    Bill


  • Ratatoskr
    March 23, 2008

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    Inspiring

    I liked this very much. I enjoy reading poems like this because the ones I try to do like this end up either really weird or even weirder. Anyways nice job, and keep them coming.

  • ecrivain01
    March 23, 2008
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    Very nice ...

    and I am surprised you didn't enter this in a contest. It's very well done.

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