I look upon this,
this scar across my wrist
of times gone bye
I was that dark haired kid
a loner, no one cared what I did
Wallowing in self pity
Then I looked at myself in disgust
my mind was now too dark to trust
this dark little boy
so right then I made a gasp
knowing that happines was in my grasp
just a shuffle away
Skimming on the surface
not worryying who wins the race
makes for carefree joy
its just that nothing matters
except knowing nothing matters
It's my life
and I keep dancing through.
A contest entry
- "Wicked" Lyrics Inspired! by liduen.
600 points, ended April 12, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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We talked about this one too, and although I still don't like the second to last stanza very much, I think the final stanza is perfect, and very well penned. I hope you do well in this contest and get many more trophies so everyone will know how amazing you are. I already know, but I see it again every day. I love you so much.
all my love,
S
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Great interpretation (yes, i know i can't spell) of the song. I like how you intergrated lines from it through out the poem. Very well done, good luck in the contes
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