throughout the day
we have so many day dreams.
so many thoughts.
every night,
the sky is getting lighter.
the stars are growing brighter.
the wind whispering in my ear..
"hold onto this, you know you love how it feels."
oh how the sky knows your every thought.
oh how the trees see your every move.
i’m dreaming about something.
always thinking.
always feeling.
so many fears,
so many things to let go of.
it gives me confidence knowing you are there every step of the way.
every thought.
every move.
just like you were before.
when you’re looking at the sky,
know i’m looking at the same one.
let that day dream consume you.
let it take you somewhere only thoughts would allow.
everyday,
the sky is growing bigger and bigger.
the wind is getting warmer and warmer.
soon enough we’ll be in a place we’ll never have to leave.
we can runaway until we find home.
or we can dream about it and wish were there.
lets ride the waves of freedom and love.
let them consume our bodies.
let them put us places we could only dream.
oh. please don’t go away.
please don’t let us lose
what this is that we can call so good.
and it’s the closest to perfection i’ve been in sometime.
this is that happiness,
i’ve been searching for.
and it’s all in my head,
the thoughts of you and i.
it’s a day dream,
that i always like to have.
this all just fell into place.
it fell right into my lap.
right in to my heart.
oh and it’s completely new.
for both you and me.
when i hear your voice,
its like a dream come true.
it’s a dream, that i’ve had so many times.
but just now, it’s got this whole new meaning.
and there are so many things you do to me.
there are so many things we could do.
so many things that we could feel.
the sand in between our toes.
the salt water hitting our cuts.
burning the flesh.
it’s a pain that will never have felt so good.
because in this dream there is no pain.
because we could never hurt one another.
it’s against our day dream laws.
oh i have to thank you for sparking
in me what it is i needed to find.
oh thank you for teaching me how to fly
after my wings have been so badly broken.
oh most of all
thank you for being my day dream
and letting me be yours.
A contest entry
- Expressing Your Feelings by Judo.
700 points, ended March 23, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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There are a few spelling/grammatical mistakes in this, but overall, I like the idealism. I can totally relate
I really like these lines:: "lets ride the waves of freedom and love.
let them consume our bodies.
let them put us places we could only dream."
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every one has dreams and everyone has goals. This is very well done. I'm glad you could enter!


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You mustn't have your (i) in lower cases. the small (i) say you don't think of yourself as important. other then that I enjoyed it. we all have day dreams its a small get ways from life when times get rough,, keep on writing,

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hmmmm.... Interesting! i like this, beautifully written
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thank you.
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