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Powder

His once bright eyes
Now dark and dazed
Clouded by
A chemical haze
Unresponsive
Broken, blind
The boy I knew
Now left behind
His tongue singed
By cruel addictions
He chokes on lies
And contradictions

Pleasure driven
Easy, cheap
Dirt is what you
Eat and sleep
Open, swallow
Then start over
Call me one day
When you're sober
Do you remember
When kicks were free?
Now you inhale
Whilst I must bleed
We're both dragged down
By blackened tides
So I'll see you on
The other side

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  • darkeningwithblues
    April 17, 2008

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    hey i'm pretty much an addict of all kinds of drugs u should check my poems out i started at a really ealry age anyways nice poem keep it up

  • krazyheather
    March 28, 2008
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    i know how this is my boyfriend is hooked on the powde