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Deep inside

Inside my heart is

 a flowing aroma

with a soft

tenderness reaching. 

Inside my soul is

tree  of blossom,

blooming in the

stillness of peace

Which floods my

creative urges fully.

 

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  • HugsForEveryone
    June 14, 2008

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    hehe wow I loved the word choice especially. This was very awesome, I also loved the blossoming part. I loved this short freewrite. Awesome, loved it!

    ♥♥♥♥♥

  • shortyjo
    April 1, 2008
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    I love this. Beautiful image.


  • Kari gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    ooooo this was really really nice indeed. I like it a lot and the flow. Well done and best of luck


  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    March 23, 2008
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    Good write.


  • Immortal Obscurity Greeters member
    March 23, 2008

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    This is lovely, sweetie... very tender and heartfelt. Well done, and best of luck to you!

    Laura xxx

  • Nighttime angel
    March 23, 2008

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    this is a beautiful poem, the imagery in it is quite vivid. I do so love this poem.. your take on the prompt was great.

    good luck

    kat


  • penman gold member
    March 23, 2008
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    Excellent

    So heart felt and full of wonderful images. Best of luck in the contest.

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