You came and thanked me with your smile
that so did warm me for a while,
you came knowing you conquer still
this faithful heart that has no will.
And you were shy and so afraid
was this the best move you had made?
I just sat looking up at you
hoping deep in my heart you knew.
Yet you must know I love you so
I always hate to see you go,
hating the dreaded sad goodbye
but then you are so very shy.
You came and took my tender hand
so unexpected and unplanned,
and here was I your silent love
who came and went the peaceful dove.
I wait again for your return
when once again my cheek will burn,
rose lips will tremble with a smile
bring warmth and safety for a while.
You came knowing you conquer still
this tired heart that has no will.
A contest entry
- Best Love Poetry Ever Written!!!! Give Me All of Your Passion!!! by Eulb kcalB.
350 points, ended March 28, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love like no other by okadadokie.
680 points, ended April 24, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Unique and different poem. Great write.
~Oka/KC -
Beautiful rhythmic rhyme and beat. Near flawless. Love the coyness and shyness. Love moves too fast these days, not leaving time for old time courting. This reminds me of old time love. Very well written. I wish the best to you in the contest.
Sam
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absolutely dreamy.
Sigh.
Love, Lane
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