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You

There is no one that is like you,
That makes me feel the way you do.
I could stay in your arms forever and more,
And you make me think things I never did before.
I never dreamed of someone like you-
If I had, I would call you too good to be true.
But you are real, and you are here,
I can't seem to even think when you are near.
When you smile, the sky lights up for me,
And by your side is where I will always be.
It's cute to watch you get mad,
And you are a friend like I never had.
So, you are one of a kind around here,
ANd with you beside me, I have no fear.

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Love poems are so much fun to write.

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  • okadadokie
    April 24, 2008
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    I like your style and way with words. Great job. Sorry for the delay.

    ~Oka/KC

  • summore
    March 23, 2008
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    Ur rite. As long as no one gets hurt,sometimes it's funny when in love to watch a person snarl up, nose flare, eyes bug, slober from mouth then sneeze right in ya face. lol. How's that for mad? **It's cute to watch you get mad,** I like this one