Minds
move.
Hearts
mend.
Memories recollect pasts
only to realize,
repetition barring actions
letting souls now smile
as we are living today
tomorrow's new content awaits.
Author notes
10lines
prompt:
"The present's just a pleasant interruption to the past." - SOMETHING CORPORATE, 'Konstantine'
A contest entry
- Quickie by Abby In Chains..
450 points, ended March 23, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 100 Short Prewrites by Kari.
450 points, ended March 31, 2008, 64 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oh, this was really really beautiful. I liked the way I felt at the end of this piece. Very well done here
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the last line is my favorite. i like the format.
nicely done, best of luck to you.
Abby -
Well written again Steph....you do have a very good pen there....good luck
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WOW!! I really love this poem of yours.. excellent take on the prompt. Love it....
good luck
kat
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Really nice sis.....you always relax me....I come away from you with a smile...always.
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im not your sis
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Such beautiful flow and very healing. You'll probably want to mind your spelling.
Truly gorgeous thoughts though, truly.
Steve
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haha, what did i spell wrong this time? my spellcheck doesnt work =(
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OH! Sorry didn't know. You got most of it ... the last tomorrow is spelled wrong ... depending on what you want for baring ... bare=baring bar=barring
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lol. thanks for helping me
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Most welcome.
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thats very nice of you ^_^
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Amazing
Fantastic use of words
I think you will do well with this contest
Julie
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This was so gorgeous!!!! Now why can't my mind think like this??? You did a most amazing job here and I wish you the best of luck.....::hands you jelly beans::
Happy Easter!!!
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lol. yay! ^_^ jelly beans! thankies =)
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Great write. I need some lessons LOL
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