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Born Here

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“Chim chim-in-ey, chim chim-in-ey
Chim chim cher-ee!
Da da du
Da da du
Da du, De ummm”    (Mary Poppins)



Some say the city she never sleeps,
down seep her tears
past doorways, through gutters

like rain on the grime
chalk marks fade ~
stick ball innocence - matures.

To marry anger with guns
or paint graffatic rainbows,
dreams seem obscene, obscure

beyond her limits.


“It's a beautiful noise
Made of joy and of strife
Like a symphony played
By a passing parade
It's the music of life”    (Neil Diamond)


Grass grows though concrete cracks
as fostered flowers embrace the sun
and weeds learn to bloom;

let dreams return,
sweep the stoop of each others coop,
forgive the anger…

unity knows no shame
listen to song of the city
her heart beats

where the children play.










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  • NurseChilly gold member
    April 10, 2008

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    I do like this piece, it got a good rhythm and good ideas too...

    the heart in us all, should live in the future of the children

    many thanks for entering my contest and well done

    G.x


  • DogFish silver member
    March 26, 2008
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    five stars!


  • Black-Moon
    March 23, 2008

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    Wow, I really liked that. I loved your reference to the "heartbeat of the city." Very well done, and nice use of quotes interspersed through out the poem. Good luck in the contest.