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[ your blue eyes shine. ]

your blue eyes shine.
I still cant believe it,
that your all mine.
your truly beautiful, I must admit.

your hand brushes mine and I smile.
I know it sounds strange,
but i want you to stay for a long while.
I never want any of this to change.

I want to be with you forever,
and I want to die, with you to adore.
I want to remember how you say whatever,
when I say I love you more.

I want you to kiss me goodnight,
and keep me safe as I sleep.
I want you to be there when theres no more light.
I want you know your someone IŽll always keep.

I hope that youŽll always be there,
and that you will forever stay.
I hope you know I love you,
and that IŽll never stray away.

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haha another [poem for josh

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  • okadadokie
    April 24, 2008
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    Your style and way with words is simply wonderful. Sorry for the delay.

    ~Oka/KC