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His lighter was broken –
              Do you have a light?
              Bad habit, that,
              No light, then?
Whipped out the birthday Zippo 
Took out some skins and lit up myself,
Being a lady with disgrace exactly how I was told.
He made me laugh
So much that he heard my more-than-smokers’ cough,
He told me I had lung trouble,
              How do you know that?
              I’m a doctor.
              Oh.
Candyfloss tastes pink,
It got stuck in my curls when I slipped
On the wet grass queuing for the carousel.
I never asked for his number,
Forgot to ask his first name.
I never made it to the white horses
and got stuck on the brown pony.

(It's a good thing chances come in threes).

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  • bipolardeathcat
    March 24, 2008
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    Abstract. I can't tell what you are thinkining. But I want too.