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Fairy Song

I wish I had the fairy's ear
The lily's trumpet sound to hear,
The blue bell's chime, the creeper's horn -
The sweetest song of Easter morn.

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  • ea silver member
    April 11, 2008
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    Congratulations on the bronze with this sweet poem.


  • MargaretG
    April 9, 2008

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    It feels like nature should be celebrating at Easter, and all these flowers shaped like trumpets and bells would be audible to keen hearing. Sweet idea, nicely done.


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    April 8, 2008

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    You have expressed much within this short verse. I enjoyed this so much. Love the image of the Easer Lily which symbolize purity, virtue, innocence, hope and life—the spiritual essence of Easter.

    To hear the song indeed would be a blessing. Well done. A wonderful entry for this contest.

    A time when less is so very much MORE. Best of luck in the judging. ~Pamela

  • Eusebius
    March 24, 2008

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    four lines...but four absolutely superb lines! Loved 'em, loved 'em, loved 'em.... bravo... bravo... bravo...


  • Sandygram silver member
    March 24, 2008

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    Lovely Poem

    A beautiful poem about the lovely Easter flowers. Lovely imagery makes for a delightful read this spring morning. Take care, Sandy

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