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Everlasting Day

my day
is everlasting

opening eyes
and windows and doors

following the golden
gossamer of God

awaiting the winning
wake of the cocoon

myra

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Written February 10th, 2002

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  • myrataal silver member
    April 14, 2002
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    thanks, Shadid, I love your work too.

  • Shadid
    April 14, 2002
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    I have just read a beautiful one.:)


  • EvolovE
    February 11, 2002
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    spiritual and wise ... oXXXo

    nourished
    xxx


  • denlexx
    February 11, 2002
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    lovely write

  • yolanda
    February 11, 2002
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    Give me more - I love your writing!


  • myrataal silver member
    February 11, 2002
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    LOL gecko! I am mature enough to live with mature ...


  • gecko
    February 11, 2002
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    not sure if you should take the mature part as a compliment or otherwise.
    beautiful wording Myra


  • myrataal silver member
    February 10, 2002
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    Oh aiwaz! Thank you for this sincere compliment ... I cherish it, coming from a master.

  • aiwaz
    February 10, 2002
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    i love being the first one to comment on yr work! yr economy presicion of language and elegant simplicity is the mark of a mature poet

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