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words can feel

at first glance
you see nothing more
than random words
put in a specific order.

but on a double take
the splash of black and white
alters into a tempest
of shifting colors.

fireworks of joy, sorrow,
hatred, and pain ignite
through every bone and muscle
of your frozen body.

a whirlwind of warming scents
twist around you
piercing straight through
to your heart.

and finally
you see more than just a poem.

Author notes

i kinda like this.
i used imagery to descibe imagery.
well, a poem full of imagery.

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