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Cloudburst

You're always that one
Whom I seek to tell my truth
That reflection of integrity
A mirror
For my reality
When you spoke
My heart came gushing up
To greet you
Now capturing a precious moment
Words full of grace and love
They whisper beween the pillars
Of the chatter of everyday;
Our realme
Where graceful meaning
Falls in turrents
Down sparklng waterfalls
Of the heart
All clouds blown away
The sky shines,
Translucent infinite.















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For the memory of an old friend

A contest entry

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  • Sandip Saha
    March 25
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    Tale of heart can be told only to a listener who reaches heart. Well done.

  • aww wow thats beautiful. really gorgeous imagery. im not completely sure of the relevance to my contest, could you send me a short IM explaining? but this is gorgeous and i dont feel its heaps irrelevant. thanks hepas for entering!
  • Oh hon! It's so good to see you back on here writing your beautiful poetry!!! This is lovely!


  • Providence
    March 23

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    Ah Tara, this is as a breathless confession from one soul to another.

    "A mirror
    For my reality"

    Indeed others always reflect our truth to us!

    Beautiful!

    Marianne