It would be nice to be Free,
free to live,
To Free my thoughts and feelings,
to see the world.
Having the freedom,
to say goodbye and to move on with life.
Being Free is like,
being let go of people holding on to you.
But yet not trapping you from your life and spirit.
A contest entry
- Short Poems by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended May 26, 2008, 176 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you like most about it? and dose it need any thing els?
Comments
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Thank you for entering my short poems contest. I thought that the last few lines were a little bit awkward, but that might be just me.
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I really like this one
I love the line to free my thoughts and feelings, to see the world. it's just an amazing write.
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Free to flow in harmony with all things. Free to be. This is a meaningfull piece of poetry. I hope you find the wisdom to emancipate these feelings and longing. A good poem
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