Ruby coloured liquid
Covering my floor
Legs turn to jelly
As I head towards the door
Scars, wrinkles and lines
Distroting his features
As he approaches me
On all fours like creatures
Kinife in hand
Like foot in sock
Gagging on blood
Leaving me in shock
He is closer now
His chilling voice
Make me shudder unwilingly
Left without a choice
Cool, sharp blade
Firmly on my neck
Slight trickle of blood
But what the heck?
The first slice of pain
An involuntary sigh
Swearing my revenge
With one final cry
This is one of my Nightmares Great Idea for a contest btw x
Comments
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Powerful write. Great rhyming flow and this expressed lots of emotion and seemed rather creepy. Each stanza seemed to build up the suspense. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in the contest.
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good work, I liked the story line and the rhymes. It flows very well, you can feel the pain emminating from the piece. Good work!
Hope you win the contest, you deserve it! -
Humm..this is shocking ..and throught provoking as well..the dark approach to the situation is though made quite strong yet..the pain itself is the reason for the worry and this is it..thanks for sharing your heart...well narrated write ...
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