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Rags

Two Hearts.


Queen..

Spade



... "I fold".

Author notes

Most players would fold 2 of Hearts, Queen of Spades - about as mismatched a 'pocket' hand as you can get in Texas Hold'em poker, where 'Rags' is an affectionate term for a crap hand.

There was an obvious attempt at misdirection with the opening line, don't know if it worked or not!

I guess this can be a companion/overture to 'Underdog'
( http://allpoetry.com/poem/1363850 )

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  • Sunkissed xo
    November 27, 2008

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    What an interesting write, very compelling and thought-provoking. I like this a lot, it's very unique! Well done
    - Sweet Blue Eyes

  • phoenixonfire
    April 1, 2008
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    WITTY!!!! N very catchy!!!

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  • phoenixonfire
    March 30, 2008

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    HEY!

    The propmt is Mismatch

    5 words

    not one less not one more...

    u have 2 dayz!

    good luck

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