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Float Away

Missing image

Affections flood over
         restrictions grab hold

In-wrapping loved hearts
         asphyxia's control.

Soaring so high
    above the depri


Whispering clouds
    for-tell misery

Love at first sight

[clouded by fog]

 

Love like balloons

               just moving, along.

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prompt: pic
pic credit: unknown

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  • Kari gold member
    March 31, 2008

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    I like the picture there. I really think you've done a wonderful job on that take. Thanks for your entry


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    March 24, 2008

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    Excellent

    Lovely take on the photo prompt
    Your poem speaks volumes and flows very well.
    Great job
    Wish you the best in the contest!

    PEACE
    David