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Rag Doll

Missing image

Rags

[picked blind]

 

 pieced,

 

          perfection.

 

Author notes

luna-midnight
prompt:Mismatch
5words.
pic credit:Stephanie Wood

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  • between slices
    April 2, 2008

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    ooh, well said that! mismatch in its own way is wonderful when put together... it's all perceptions anyway.

  • phoenixonfire
    March 30, 2008
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    excellent piece....well worded

    pri


  • Kelli Marie
    March 30, 2008

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    I think you met the challenge with flying colors. A very well written piece of short poetry. Good luck.
    Kelli


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    March 30, 2008

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    That was great honey. I like this too. The imagery is really strong. You have done well with this.

    Love
    Wayne
    x


  • MotorcycleFreak silver member
    March 30, 2008
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    Cool

    I like it! It works perfectly. Less words, better imagery, I always say. Well done. ~Peace~Gar

  • phoenixonfire
    March 30, 2008

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    HEY!

    The propmt is Mismatch

    5 words

    not one less not one more...

    u have 2 dayz!

    good luck

    pri

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