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Morning poem

I promise to smile at you
every morning.

Kiss your chest,
your eyes to wake you.

Wrap in your arms like a blanket on sunday morning.

Lie still as you kiss me,

letting tiny giggles escape from me

you will always know how happy you make me.

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  • just mercedes gold member
    March 23, 2008

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    I like this very much, the happy optimism of it is a joy to read. I'm a sucker for love poems, though. I like the sunday morning blanket especially.