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Missing image

Little nibbles, starting with my hands and

I feel your hot breath

 

as tingles of pleasure surge up my spine,

causing me to shudder.

 

Maybe it’s the anticipation or then again,

the soft touch of your lips

 

sliding along my forearms, patiently tracing

aqua blue veins

 

like a traveler seeking the scenic route to

a place, called ecstasy, and I love

 

the way you look up with those sensual eyes,

never breaking contact with

 

my body, that slowly writhes as you blissfully

torture me with tenderness.

 

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  • Heavenly Angel
    March 26

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    Congratulations on your silver trophy; very much deserved!
    Very very nice this is
    All the best to you!

  • Dalaney gold member
    March 25

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    congrats on your sensual silver, Michael
    Very very well deserved...sheesh...open a window,
    it's hot in here....Love, Lane


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 25

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    Oh yes yes yes!! Wow.. gulp.. this was so sensual!! It took me on a ride and definitely stirred my senses! Oh how I would love to traverse that scenic route! Love the words you use... just right to bring out the intesity and sensuality!
    Thank you so much for this entry!


  • ardentMarch gold member
    March 23

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    "like a traveler seeking the scenic route to
    a place, called ecstasy, and I love "

    what a unique line...love this.

  • John Veinot Sr.
    March 23

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    amnd what a lovely togetherness yo have painted it to be.

    Thank you for the read again.

    's


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    March 23

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    Excellent

    A very loving and sensual take on the picture prompt
    Your poem has indeed set a high standard for others.
    Elegant words that our from the page.
    Very well penned
    Wish you the best in the contest1

    Stay Safe
    PEACE
    David


  • CinfullyDelicious
    March 23

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    OOh crap I don't stand a chance against this Dad

    WOW

    I love it...so very sensual , a perfect read



    Cin


  • Margaret Denham
    March 23

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    You certainly got a lot out of the picture, Michael, or is it just that you have such a good memory of past experiences? This is an amazingly soft and sensual poem written in a style that you do so well. Best wishes in the contest dear.



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