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Dying

The world
is spelling
words of hate
through dying clouds,
slowly falling,
through life
as if
trapped
by eternal darkness.

Meh...

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  • dark desire
    March 10

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    Pixie Dust Touch

    Your poem has been touched with PIXIE FAIRY DUST from The Enchanted Realm. Now it is your turn to visit a Pixie and tag that poem.

    this is a powerful poem... it had potential!


  • Beauty in silence
    May 5, 2008
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    U Wierdo Gab!!


  • Emmaluv
    March 28, 2008
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    I like it very much!


  • InMyFlames
    March 23, 2008

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    ha ha you got removed . i think its a nice piece though love its very deep

  • Page Deleted.
    March 23, 2008

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    I am sorry but I am removing this piece from my contest as it does not fit requirements. I had asked for 30-40 words but this only has 20, and would not be fair to the other contestants who did write according to the guidelines. Feel free to enter a new piece based on the prompt "Tyranny".

    Liloven

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