The grass was cool beneath my back your body warm above
and there beneath the starry sky we made fantastic love,
you played my body perfectly so blissfully in tune
in shadows of the broad old oaks the spotlight was our moon.
No words had passed between us with our breathing passion filled
through gentle urging from my limbs your secret seed was spilled,
skins glistened with our heated sex still lost for words within
and as the moon waved it's goodnight you kissed my fevered skin.
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Comments
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A lovely poem in ballad meter, although with the tetrameter and termeter on the same line.
You gave us good stuff thiis time Bumpy
All the best from us both!
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Oh my....this is so delightful, mmm I just love it..
Beautiful and sensual are a huge fave of mine...
Bravo...
Best wishes with this entry...
Blessings
~A~
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Oh my hot hot hot! cold shower time! Oh no I don't have one! lol. This was very very good
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Hello there.
I enjoyed the constant rhythm in this poem and the lovely way you used enjambment to keep the energy going.
The poem is also nicely detailed.
Good luck in the contest.
Have a gr8 day,
BJ.
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The poem goes well with the picture too.
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Wow WOW good write I like how you kept it in great detail. Good luck in the contest
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Nice
The warmth generated between to bodys joined cas one as the moom caresses both hearts
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wow! you've really done yourself well with this wonderfully sensual piece!
wonderful stanza, such imgery...
"The grass was cool beneath my back your body warm above
and there beneath the starry sky we made fantastic love,
you played my body perfectly so blissfully in tune
in shadows of the broad old oaks the spotlight was our moon."
good luck in the contest
mike, aka jonathan wikkins
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What can I say.....................
All the best in the contest..
Love you
Suz xx
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