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Kiss Me




Threads adorned with fragrance
shall clap in joys acceptance
in the waltz of love stories
held apart in soft knots
enthralling soul to whisper or sing.
  your soft outline
  smudged in you and us
    timidly tickling me
   
I surrender..
            ...kiss me maybe




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  • Ghetto Superstar. silver member
    June 1, 2008
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    This is lovely!! Great work x

  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    March 24, 2008

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    Awwwwwww

    Both a charming and lovely take on the photo prompt.
    You have reached out side the box and created a splendid piece.
    Thank you for your entry and I wish you the best in the contest.


    PEACE
    David

    • phoenixonfire
      March 24, 2008
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      Thanks david! this one was difficult for me...considering i practically suck at love works but hey!!
      thanks again..

      luv n peace
      pri