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Inaccurate

Rainbows crumble
 
    ~within~
   
caustic cyclones.

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LadyDementia

Prompt; mismatch in 5 words

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  • NeonRose
    April 1, 2008
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    Wow! A panorama of vision in five small words! Good luck in the contest.

  • phoenixonfire
    March 30, 2008
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    Marvellous wording...

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