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I Can’t Resist

 

 

 

 

A low cut blouse, or a strapless dress,

I must confess, always stirs

 

something deep within, as my eyes focus

on your invite.

 

Strategically placed dabs of perfume wait

on subtle slopes of

 

your neck, begging me to come, carefully

search feminine territory

 

as my mind wildly races to a moment when

lips and fingers explore beyond,

 

into warm, scented regions yearning to show

pleasing sights, and indulge.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • tara wilson gold member
    April 7, 2008

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    This is a nice little scene of foreplay.
    Sensual & very indulging....beautiful, gentle & sexy - thanks so much for entering the contest.


  • Nicolette gold member
    April 7, 2008

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    I agree with Mari's comment and I can only add that I thoroughly enjoyed this "prelude" to "music"! Loved the sense of seduction and anticipation your word create and make the reader feel.

    The poem even looks good on this page and I liked the way the lay-out compliments the content. Lovely poetry, Michael... I really enjoyed this one.

    Thank you for this entry.

    ~ Nicolette


  • Mari Goes gold member
    April 6, 2008

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    Here the poem is a prelude. The senses are a gateway to more intense ones. And the difference between men and women I believe can be seen here. Men are more image and sense driven, women more emotion driven. For men the touch is that prelude to passion, for women it's for intimacy, that emotional connection.

    It was a beautiful, well written poem, thanks for entering it in the contest.

    Mari


  • Tecolote
    March 27, 2008

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    Hmmmmmmm...for some reason it made me remember the 2nd movie of the matrix, reloaded, where they go to meet the french guy and one of the characters has an ice-cream sent to her by the french dude...anyways, 'nough drifting, yes I think this created pretty good the initial atmosphere, the tip of the iceberg or anticipation for mabye someting so blissful and passionate about to unfold..nice!...


  • SandraMVeinot
    March 24, 2008

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    brings back memories of young lovers...
    so long ago so far away....

    Thank you for the evening read.

    's for you too!!!!!


  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    March 23, 2008

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    Definitely from the male perspective...it's more confident, more direct, more earthy...and sure enough like all of us guys, thinking of the end zone.


  • michichoeret
    March 23, 2008

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    very sexy write

    but a bit overconfident. who says it's an invite? maybe she herself just likes the smell and dress. don't think all female perks are directed at men. just like lipstick. it just feels nicer when you see yourself.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    March 23, 2008

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    wow daddy this is such a soft and sensual piece and you have painted the imagery within it too well done daddy

  • Page Deleted.
    March 23, 2008

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    this piece is so very tastefully penned. best of luck in the contest.

    liloven


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    March 23, 2008

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    Ohhh those sweet indulgences again.

    Now the ladies of AP will be baring shoulders and more for your enjoyment dear

    I hope you do well in the contest with this enticing and highly enjoyable poem.




  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 23, 2008

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    And we can't resist your sensual writes my friend! This is so... highly provocative!!

    We all have the things we find particularly alluring.. different for everyone.

    This is just gorgeous!

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