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Sush Now

Don't ask questions; just take what they prescribe.
C'mon now, swallow it down. It will make you feel alright.
Look through your glazed eyes,
Is there anyone that isn't in disguise?
Yesterday's follies make up today's lies.

On a fast track to being molded.
Lives of originality are scolded.
Personalities are being sugar-coated.
This understanding has to be folded.

You sure are pretty,
Simply witty
What a pity...

Now appear
Manicured!

Fear

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  • TabbyCat
    March 24, 2008

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    Looking out through a peephole, I watched all the plastic people... Surely a great point, and a worthy entry into my little contest. Thank you.


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    March 23, 2008

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    This is such an interesting write. I really enjoyed reading through this and totally agree with what you have written. best of luck for the contests.


  • Angelflower
    March 23, 2008
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    Hmm. this was very interesting.. I really like it. Great write, Jetleena