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The Love Desired



Take off your masks for me
There's no need for them
I'll meet you where you're at
And love you as you are
Your baby blues don't have to cry
In seeking out "the perfect guy"
'Cause he's not there
I will love you just as much
In your slippers
As I would in your stiletto heels
I will try to be patient and kind
Like His word instructs of me
But may I increase in this
Oh love, listen to what I have to say
The make-up you wear
Or the clothes you don't
Isn't what makes me love you more
Blinded by the poison apple
Snow White, please wake up
The love desired
I'm here to bring
Far from what Cupid could offer
Please, understand
This is what love is
In my sight- you were born gorgeous
Take my hand
Let me wipe your tears
And I'll explain it again...
 

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  • movedon
    July 29, 2008
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    I love the first line. Very soft write. I really enjoyed reading it!

    Warmest,
    Mylee


  • warrior-eagle
    May 12, 2008

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    This sounded like a song
    with a very sweet melody
    as a lullaby to me
    and pure,real love is--simply amazing,
    only if it is God sent.
    But very good write.

    ..Simply Me♥


  • lustfulviolets
    April 14, 2008
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    good write


  • raggyann
    April 1, 2008
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    pure love is so worth wild
    and you said it so well